what’s that i hear?

 

time, that beautiful handmaiden
whispered in my ear:

you gotta get going baby
you gotta get going
death is near

but i’ve got songs to write
sweet melodic words to pen
surely it must be a sin
to die with them within?

then you gotta write baby
you gotta write
get those words down on a page
act them out on the stage

oh time, my sweet, won’t
you love me more?
i’ll pen a phrase, turn a word or two
in honour of your amour

i can’t baby i can’t
you have what time you have
and no more

(knock, knock)

what’s that i hear?

tis death knocking at the door

 – c.lowe


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Beaman
17 years ago

This is very good. It has a classical ring to it which you’ve developed extremely well. Great ending!

Anndi
17 years ago

Lovely dear friend.. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Big kiss

gautami
17 years ago

It smoothly flows. Nothing jarring.

liz elayne
17 years ago

i like how she talks to you with endearments…that gave the poem a different kind of rhythm as i read it aloud.

chicklegirl
17 years ago

This poem has a flirtacious quality I love, that makes the ending have a lot more punch.

Beth
17 years ago

Oh wow…that makes me want to accomplish something today…time doesn’t stop does it??

🙂